Let me drink from the look in your eyes
eyes that have me wildly mesmerized
mesmerized under their piercing blue spell
spell that only you hold powers to cast over me
me, with a heart out-of-control in love
love, a whirlwind of euphoric emotions so true
true in not only our hearts, but in our minds
minds, fully aware of their endless thoughts
thoughts so amorous of us entwined
entwined in each otherβs arms forever,
forever, still too few seconds for our time together
Lauren Scott Β© 2018
Lovely….
Thank you! π·
That’s very good.
Many thanks, Binky! I’m glad you enjoyed this. And thanks for always being such a great supporter! π
It is good when life is like this, and inspiring too. π
Yes, it is, Ben. π
woha!! That’s awesome Lauren! Feel the tiger in me rising just from reading!
Thanks for the smile, Scott! I’m so glad you liked this. It reminds me of the earlier days when we both shared a lot of romance. Miss your writing, my friend…
Exquisitely beautiful! β€οΈ
Thanks so much, Betty! Hope you’re taking care of yourself! π
Beautiful, Lauren!
Thanks so much, Jill! πΌ
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Thanks again, John, for your generosity! Have a good day!
You are very welcome. You have a great day.
Of tender thought and fine expression.
Thank you, Lauren, for sharing
Much love
john
Thanks for your beautiful comment, John. I truly appreciate it. Much love to you, too!
Another beautiful piece. Well done, Lauren, my dear friend.
For me, you capture the depth of their love with this line: “forever, still too few seconds for our time together”.
When forever is too few… now that’s something.
Peace and blessings,
Eric
Thanks very much, Eric. Your comment brightens my day. That last line came to me in a flash, and now I’m so glad it did. There’s something profound when forever just isn’t long enough for two people truly in love…hope you’ve had a great day. Hugs and blessings, my friend…
Can love be so beautiful? Mesmerizing thoughts Lauren!
It sure can. I’m grateful to have found it and wish the same for everyone. Thanks so much, Balroop!
What a gift you have to make us see what you imagine in your mind. Excellent work Lauren.
Wow! What an uplifting comment to wake up to, Ian. Thank you so much! That means a lot coming from the amazing writer you are…
Mesmerizing and powerful – not unlike love itself. ππππ
Thanks, again, Sarah! Have a wonderful Wednesday. The weekend is on the horizon! π ππΌπ·β¨
so lovely!
Thanks so much, Neha! π»
Found your new favourite format? π
Nah, just another one I do like. It’s fun to try new things. I encourage you to try, too. π π
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I’ll be watching for it. π
A Big Beautiful Sigh as I feel your fulfilment.. β€ Have a beautiful week Lauren.. β€
Aww, thanks, Sue, and wishing the same for you, too! ππ·πΌ
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This is compelling, Lauren … it builds with great power and intensity. Forever never seems long enough…
Thanks so much, Annika. I appreciate your lovely words coming from the amazing writer you are. π By the way, I’m compiling a post accepting your quote challenge along with accepting awards from Sarah. I won’t be nominating others, though, because of lack of time, but those who wish to can carry on…so it should be up later today or tomorrow. Have a wonderful day! β€
I look forward to reading the quotes and other awards! πβ€οΈ A wonderful sunny day, everyone becomes so much happier and relaxed!
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Anytime I can read a lovely poem such as this, I am compelled to share it. Dear readers, please enjoy Lauren Scott’s poem, Fulfilled.
Oh, how wonderful to read this first thing in the morning, Michelle! Thanks so much, my friend! Big hugs for a wonderful Monday, too! β€β€β€
Thanks so much, Lauren. Iβm glad it made you happy. Big hugs to you, too! πππ