Lineation

You’ve drawn the line
and I can feel reality as

barbed wire pierces my
heart and blood stains
my outlook on us. It would
have 
been nice to see
more 
deeply into each
other’s 
worlds. I was living
in 
the clouds not seeing 
this sketched out.
So for now,

I’ll continue walking
through fields 
of what could have been

Lauren Scott © 2015

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32 thoughts on “Lineation

  1. Most evocative thoughts and poignant points in your verses dear Lauren!Life is so unpredictable and human’s soul unfathomable indeed … Have a wonderful weekend my friend:) ❤ xxx

  2. The uncertainties and unpleasant surprises are worst kept secrets of life, and when they come they come in loads, and it is then that we check our tenacity and intensity to fight it out and protect our life and extent our living…
    So beautiful conceptualized and wonderfully presented…lineation, love it.
    😀

  3. Sad but lovely poem Lauren
    I too have lingered in the fields of what could have been.
    It does no good to the emotions of the heart.
    There are brighter and better pastures Lauren.
    I hope you find yours.

    • Thanks so much, Ian, and just so you know, this is completely fiction. Many of my melancholy poems are derived from the past (zillions of years ago). 🙂 I do agree with what you said though…have a wonderful week!

    • I’m so sorry to hear about your estrangement with your son, Don, but I appreciate your kind words about my poem. I know, some poems hit home and they’re not always happy emotions..take care…

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