36 thoughts on “Timing”

1. Nicely put, Lauren!

   February 11, 2015 at 7:40 pm

   1. Thanks so much, Binky! I always appreciate your comments!

      February 12, 2015 at 3:23 pm

2. The last few lines are tragic and profound Lauren. You write from the heart.

   February 11, 2015 at 8:11 pm

   1. I know this one is a bit sad but thank you, Ian, for your wonderful complement! Sometimes I sit and dig deeply into the past and inspiration comes to me.

      February 12, 2015 at 3:24 pm

3. The ‘in-between’ is such a powerful lead in and ‘place.’

   February 12, 2015 at 12:25 am

   1. Aww, thanks, Jean! I appreciate that very much!

      February 12, 2015 at 3:26 pm

4. Beautifully written, but so sad.

   February 12, 2015 at 2:43 am

   1. Thanks, Michelle, and I guess sometimes I have to add some melancholy, just like life…:)

      February 12, 2015 at 3:26 pm

5. Beautifully melancholy Lauren. Love it ❤️ Xxx

   February 12, 2015 at 4:00 am

   1. Thanks so much, Chris…some inspiration comes from many, many years ago. 🙂 ♥ xo

      February 12, 2015 at 3:27 pm

6. This is so beautifully written but a little sad towards the end. I always love reading your poetry, Lauren!

   Blessings,
   -Naima

   February 12, 2015 at 4:32 am

   1. Sadness is a part of life and love so I have to include it and many experiences from the past bring inspiration. Thanks so much, Naima, I always appreciate your support! ♥

      February 12, 2015 at 3:30 pm

7. Another beautiful poem, Lauren. ❤️ I feel our strong transitory nature as humans within your words. We cannot hold on to anything in this life, yet we are connected and are the stars themselves. Lovely, my friend. Xoxo

   February 12, 2015 at 4:50 am

   1. And another amazing comment, Angela! Thanks so much, my friend. Your warm words provide encouragement in big doses! Sending hugs! xo

      February 12, 2015 at 3:32 pm

8. Touching words Lauren! Congrats on your new book, LOVE the cover photo. I’ll have to check it out when I’m at Amazon later today. Hugs to you, G 🙂

   February 12, 2015 at 9:26 am

   1. Thanks a bunch, Geraldine, and thanks in advance for supporting my book, too! I hope you enjoy it! Big hugs back! 🙂

      February 12, 2015 at 3:33 pm

9. I like being under the stars and gazing up at them. They are beyond our control, for sure! Lovely poem, Lauren ❤

   February 12, 2015 at 7:19 pm

   1. I love them, too, Christy, and thanks for your wonderful comment, my friend! Have a great weekend, too! ♥

      February 13, 2015 at 6:47 am

10. Short and beautifully sweet Lauren.
    Wishing you a beautiful Valentines day.
    I hope your poem was appreciated by the one you share the stars with

    February 14, 2015 at 2:12 am

    1. Thanks so much, Ian, for your lovely comment as always and I hope you had a wonderful Valentine’s Day, too! Enjoy the rest of your weekend!

       February 15, 2015 at 7:31 am

11. I love the paradox in this, Lauren, which life … and love … and relationships are tested but also enriched by. Sounds like you had a lovely Valentines Day – may the blessings of love be yours forever. XO ❤

    February 15, 2015 at 4:41 pm

    1. Thanks so much for your lovely words, Diane, and for your blessings, too. Much love to you and many hugs! ♥ xo

       February 23, 2015 at 8:07 pm

12. touching words . ♥

    February 16, 2015 at 2:18 pm

    1. Thanks so much, Renee! Hugs!

       February 23, 2015 at 8:07 pm

       1. You’re so very welcome. 🙂

          February 26, 2015 at 2:41 pm

13. Lovely Lauren!… The last verse is perfect … And so is the umbrella of stars ⭐ all the best to you. Aquileana 😀

    February 21, 2015 at 4:02 am

    1. Thanks so much, Aquileana, for your wonderful comment, as always! Wishing you a great week! ♥

       February 23, 2015 at 8:08 pm

14. Reblogged this on The Winged Woman and commented:
    A wonderful narrative on living in different dimensions!

    March 3, 2015 at 12:14 pm

    1. Thanks again for sharing my words in your world and for your beautiful comment! ♥

       March 4, 2015 at 9:03 am

15. Over the past week Venus and Mars have dominated the western sky and I have been angry with them for they have been there forever and will be there well past my time and I think, what’s not to like about me – why couldn’t I be just a planet or a star, why did I only have to be me? Still trying to work it out. Thank you for visiting my blog. I look forward to spending time with your words.

    March 3, 2015 at 1:49 pm

    1. Thanks so much for this deep comment, John, and I have often wondered the same thing about me! 🙂
       I might be taking a short break in blogland; just so you know. Your visits are greatly appreciated and I wish you a wonderful rest of the week!

       March 4, 2015 at 9:02 am

16. I must admit that I had to read this piece twice before it clicked for me at the end…why does it always seem to be a good person at the wrong time?

    March 3, 2015 at 4:48 pm

    1. Thanks so much for your comment and visit, Sean, and I wish I knew the answer to your question. That’s only one of many answers dangling around us…

       March 4, 2015 at 9:00 am

       1. This is true😯

          March 4, 2015 at 9:09 am

       2. Thanks for your comment, Sean!

          March 11, 2015 at 7:57 pm

       3. You’re welcome

          March 11, 2015 at 7:58 pm

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