A quiet interlude of two consenting minds
connecting in desired agreement
A gentle kiss becoming delectable
bodies embracing, passion flaring
the baring of equally loving souls
Each giving to fulfillment
breathless whispers
over the moon ending
descending into
anticipation
for the next
lovely
rendezvous
Lauren Scott © 2012
Baydreamer ~ Lauren Scott 
I love the rhythm! Great imagery too.
Thanks so much, Stutij, and I appreciate your visit, too!
Very lovely!
Thanks, Caddo! 🙂
WOW!!! 😉
Thanks, Sharon! 🙂 🙂
Wow!! Passionate, spiritual and beautiful!
Thanks, Betty, I was thinking of when the kids were little and these quiet moments were hard to find~ 🙂
Ah yes, I remember those days!!! 🙂
beautiful 🙂
Thanks, Kaytee! 🙂
Oh, I love the last few lines of this Lauren … still building but then the reader needs no more – very good.
Thanks, Pam, for your lovely insight…I had a different ending, but glad I thought of this instead, because it ties the whole message together~
Thank you! Hugs
This is very passionate, Lauren…Very well written, my friend…I love it!
Thank you for your time spent in my space last evening…I enjoyed your visit…As always!
Have a wonderful day!
Hugs, xx
Thanks, Deb, I wrote this after thinking of when the kids were little and finding these quiet interludes weren’t as easy as bk (before kids 🙂 )
I’m glad you liked it and I’ll be over your way again…I don’t know how I’ll ever catch up! 🙂
Hugs!
beautiful rhythm, and amazing poetry!! very greatly put together 🙂
Thanks so much, Abi! I appreciate your feedback, as always, and I’ll visit your way soon! 🙂
This is lovely! So beautiful!
Thanks so much, Jen! 🙂
This poem is marvellous. It seems to expand out, not only in the physical form but also in its pace and depiction, and then it tightens to one point: rendezvous. Excellent stuff.
Oh, thank you very much, for your insightful description; I truly appreciate your kind words!
Hi Lauren,
It’s a sweet, lovely & beautiful poem. What a imagination!! Liked it 🙂
Thank you again, Rajkishore! 🙂
This poem makes me want to run out and have a rendezvous too.
🙂 🙂
Very lovely perfection in line lengths, rhythms, language all matching the prelude, interlude and postlude of this romantic encounter, ending with my favorite lines here:
Over the moon ending
descending into
anticipation
for the next
lovely
Rendezvous”—————–especially the part about
descending into anticipation.
Oh, thanks, again, Rose! I changed the ending at the last minute and glad I did, as this one fits better and ties the moment together~
beautiful!
Thanks, Jason! 🙂
very Beautiful! Much enjoyed the read Francina
Thanks so much, Francina! 🙂
I like, I like!! Keep up the good work……
A magnificent indulgence, and beautifully worded as always, my talented friend!
I love that I can always go here when I need to read something positive! Thanks for sharing LS
Beautiful, Lauren!
LOVE it!!!!!!