GOING SOMEWHERE

A lost soul

A circling whirlwind

in the atmosphere

of life

Knowing no right direction

only uncertainty

with

infinite

insecurity

Copyright 2011

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15 thoughts on “GOING SOMEWHERE

  1. I envy people who know exactly what they’re doing and where they’re going. Sometimes they’re right with their assumptions; that is unless Life throws them a curve. Love this poem; it’s me to a “T”!

    • Thanks, Maiya, but I’m so sorry this is what your life is like right now…I hope and pray that things get better for you real soon, sincerely…
      and you’re very welcome..I look forward to reading more~

  2. I have been seriously battling depression all of last year – I have come out the other side through supportive friends and finding my passion in poetry again – but reading this has definitely reminded me of the feelings I had when I was in the strongest riptide of depression…

    And was said above, I do love how the lines were broken. Well done!

    • I’m so sorry to hear of your past battling with depression. We have known many who have been through the same, especially teen friends of my kids…I’m so glad you’ve had a support system, though, to pull you out and please keep writing…that is a wonderful way of expressing your feelings and touching others lives, as well. Thanks again for your kind words and take care~I will visit you again, too!

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